PH431: W1A3: Feedback
Hi Molly,
Please be sure to reference the posts within our Questions for the Professor section: Logos, Resumes, Artist Statements.
Keep up the hard work!
Thanks for submitting your W1A3! My feedback comes to you in the “group video” format for this assignment - located just above the rubric.
Below you’ll see information related to three out of the four sections of the rubric; information pertaining to your peer responses will be left within the gradebook.
Below you’ll see information related to three out of the four sections of the rubric; information pertaining to your peer responses will be left within the gradebook.
RE:
SUBMITTED AN ADOBE LIGHTROOM SLIDESHOW OF 20-30 STRONG IMAGES ORGANIZED
IN A LOGICAL FLOW THAT COMMUNICATES A CONSISTENT STYLE OR BRAND:
In terms of your images, I would like to see you focus more on one genre of photography. Further details are noted in the group video critique.
RE: SUBMITTED A PDF DOCUMENT OF ADDITIONAL RESOURCES TO USE IN THE E-FOLIO: LOGO, RESUME, ARTIST/BRAND STATEMENT AND BIO
In terms of your artist statement and resume, please see your re-attached files with my notes.
In terms of your logo, I would like to see you strengthen this design. You may want to consider utilizing one of the logo generating options in the Questions for the Professor section. Further details are noted in the group video critique.
In terms of your artist statement and resume, please see your re-attached files with my notes.
In terms of your logo, I would like to see you strengthen this design. You may want to consider utilizing one of the logo generating options in the Questions for the Professor section. Further details are noted in the group video critique.
RE:
WROTE ABOUT 200 WORDS EXPLAINING YOUR BRAINSTORMING IDEAS ON HOW THE
IMAGES WILL BE ORGANIZED AND HOW ALL ELEMENTS OF THE E-FOLIO WILL BE
ARRANGED. WRITING WAS FORMATTED IN THE MLA STYLE:
Your
summary met the word mark and explained very clearly how you organized
your images (by genre). In terms of spelling, sentence structure,
grammar, etc – I thought you also handled this portion of the written
essay well.
Please be sure to reference the posts within our Questions for the Professor section: Logos, Resumes, Artist Statements.
Keep up the hard work!
-Prof. F
