PHOA209: W6A1: Feedback
Hi Kathy,
You will find my feedback for your W6A1 in the form of “individual written feedback & a group video critique". Please use this feedback to help you prepare for your W7A1.
RE:
Revised the project and created a minimum of thirty new images created
with program required equipment based on areas identified in past
assignments. Submitted a contact sheet of minimum thirty images, use of
handheld light meter, and wide-angle image of lighting scheme, and
edited any final image selections. Complete Metadata was included in
contact sheet. Selected three images suitable for inclusion that meet
qualitative criteria to be included in the final portfolio (according to
the criteria listed in the lectures and self-evaluation document) and
successfully performed any necessary post-production adjustments. Included full-page lighting set up shot(s).
Completed the 30 new images; included image of handheld light meter in use & wide-angle image showing use of required 3 out of 3 lights.
Student's assignment is currently meeting the Associate's Degree standards; location was well stylized. Student is encouraged to shoot wider to give viewer more of an understanding of the size of the kitchen. Student may also want to consider aiming any hard lights up at the ceiling (to bounce the light off of the ceiling and to create a softer lighting effect.
Student is encouraged to refer to the the group video critique in regards to how to improve for the next photo shoot (particularly for photographing exterior architecture). Suggested top images are noted in the group video critique.
Student's assignment is currently meeting the Associate's Degree standards; location was well stylized. Student is encouraged to shoot wider to give viewer more of an understanding of the size of the kitchen. Student may also want to consider aiming any hard lights up at the ceiling (to bounce the light off of the ceiling and to create a softer lighting effect.
Student is encouraged to refer to the the group video critique in regards to how to improve for the next photo shoot (particularly for photographing exterior architecture). Suggested top images are noted in the group video critique.
RE:
Updated the portfolio, résumé, and statement within the web portfolio
site, including the URL. Materials meet Portfolio Standards.
Student updated statement from W1A3; details regarding the also updated resume is discussed in the group video critique; files have been not been re-attached.
Student is encouraged to double check that the updates were also made within the Bēhance Profile Page & to reply back with a URL link. Details regarding student's Work Experience section, the About section, and portfolio in Behance page will be noted in the gradebook.
Images in portfolio should show a strong understanding of feedback received in the past as well as from W6A1.
(Student is encouraged to continue to make updates throughout the course.)
RE:
Completed a brief written description that addresses the approach to
revising the final project materials and how these changes fulfill the
intention of the portfolio.
Completed the brief written statement, which met 150-word mark.
RE:
Completed the Weekly Outline and Goals section by answering all
questions and identifying clear specific goals that address measurable
technical and conceptual aspects. Completed the Journal Entry section
by identifying appropriate goals and gaps. Focused primarily on new
images included specific shoot ideas. Included visual examples to
support written ideas. Described why the examples were chosen.
Completed
and student's journal was detailed; student included a visual example
within journal. Answer to question asked within journal is noted in the
group video critique.
Information
regarding your Peer Critiques will be listed within the Grade Book.
Please feel free to get in touch with me if you have any questions
and/or concerns.
-Prof. F
