PHOA113: W1A1: Feedback
Hi Monica,
Required Equipment/Supplies
Required Textbook & Software Screenshots
Completed
-Prof. F
Great to meet you and welcome to the class! I'm looking forward to working with you this term!
Below you will read my feedback for your W1A1
via the written word. (For details related to what types of feedback
you’ll receive throughout the course, please refer to the post in our
Course Home section titled “Guidelines for Class”. Please note that the
feedback below covers ONE out of the TWO categories seen within the rubric.
RE:
WROTE A SHORT AUTOBIO COVERING THE REQUIRED DETAILS & COMMUNICATED
IDEAS AND OPINIONS EXPLICITLY AND CLEARLY IN WRITING, USING CORRECT
SPELLING AND GRAMMAR; FOLLOWED ALL DIRECTIONS ABOVE:
· Students were asked to post between 3-9 images
that s/he had taken of all the required equipment & supplies.
Students were asked to combine those photos into a contact sheet using
the course standard for creating a contact sheet. File was to be saved
as “W1A1_LastName_FirstName_PDF”.
· Students
were asked to post screenshots of his/her required software &
textbook; incorporate all screenshots into on PDF titled, “W1A1_LastName_FirstName_Software_Textbook.PDF”
Autobiography:
Student’s
autobiography covered all of the topics noted within the assignment and
was well written in terms of grammar, sentence structure &
punctuation.
Moving forward all
students are encouraged to consider his/her “writing skills” in terms
of grading. If you have not had a chance to do so already, please be
sure to read the post within our “Course Home” section titled,
“Guidelines for Class”, and see the PDF within it and refer to the
section on “Proper Writing Skills = An Expectation”.
Required Equipment/Supplies
Student’s images show of most
of the required equipment and supplies; there are a 2 items that are
not pictured clearly in the photographs and/or are missing.
Please re-shoot the missing items that are noted in the re-attached PDF. I would also like for you to step into the shot to show that this is your gear. Please complete within 48 hours.
Please re-shoot the missing items that are noted in the re-attached PDF. I would also like for you to step into the shot to show that this is your gear. Please complete within 48 hours.
Required Textbook & Software Screenshots
Completed
Information regarding your peer responses
will be left in the gradebook; please be sure to post all of your peer
responses by the given due dates as these are only accepted in “real
time”; late peer responses posts will not receive credit. If you have
not had a chance to do so already, please be sure to read the post
within our “Course Home” section titled, “Posing Guidelines for Class
Participation (Peer Responses)” for more details.
Please feel free to get in touch if you have any questions/concerns. -Prof. F