PHOA113: W1A1: Feedback

Hi Monica, 
 
Great to meet you and welcome to the class! I'm looking forward to working with you this term! 
Below you will read my feedback for your W1A1 via the written word.  (For details related to what types of feedback you’ll receive throughout the course, please refer to the post in our Course Home section titled “Guidelines for Class”.  Please note that the feedback below covers ONE out of the TWO categories seen within the rubric. 

RE: WROTE A SHORT AUTOBIO COVERING THE REQUIRED DETAILS & COMMUNICATED IDEAS AND OPINIONS EXPLICITLY AND CLEARLY IN WRITING, USING CORRECT SPELLING AND GRAMMAR; FOLLOWED ALL DIRECTIONS ABOVE:  
 
·       Students were asked to post between 3-9 images that s/he had taken of all the required equipment & supplies.  Students were asked to combine those photos into a contact sheet using the course standard for creating a contact sheet.  File was to be saved as “W1A1_LastName_FirstName_PDF”.
·       Students were asked to post screenshots of his/her required software & textbook; incorporate all screenshots into on PDF titled, “W1A1_LastName_FirstName_Software_Textbook.PDF
 
Autobiography:
Student’s autobiography covered all of the topics noted within the assignment and was well written in terms of grammar, sentence structure & punctuation. 
Moving forward all students are encouraged to consider his/her “writing skills” in terms of grading.  If you have not had a chance to do so already, please be sure to read the post within our “Course Home” section titled, “Guidelines for Class”, and see the PDF within it and refer to the section on “Proper Writing Skills = An Expectation”.

Required Equipment/Supplies
Student’s images show of most of the required equipment and supplies; there are a 2 items that are not pictured clearly in the photographs and/or are missing.

Please re-shoot the missing items that are noted in the re-attached PDF. I would also like for you to step into the shot to show that this is your gear. Please complete within 48 hours.

Required Textbook & Software Screenshots

Completed

Information regarding your peer responses will be left in the gradebook; please be sure to post all of your peer responses by the given due dates as these are only accepted in “real time”; late peer responses posts will not receive credit.  If you have not had a chance to do so already, please be sure to read the post within our “Course Home” section titled, “Posing Guidelines for Class Participation (Peer Responses)” for more details.
Please feel free to get in touch if you have any questions/concerns.
-Prof. F