PH323: W4A3: Feedback
Hi Darwin,
Below
you will find my feedback for your W4A3 in the form of “group video
feedback”; details from the rubric are discussed in the video.
RE: Submitted
contact sheet of 20 images created according to course standards, image
of handheld light meter, wide-angle image of lighting scheme, and one
marketable portrait of the subject that:
- Has correct exposure and demonstrates technical knowledge of camera and lighting control.
- Exhibits creativity with angles and composition (moving camera and subject frequently to explore the angles).
- Shows attention to composition and design elements.
- Follows instructions and requirements for assignment.
You submitted the basics of the assignment: 20 new images shot with strobe lighting (although you did not submit an image of your wide-angle lighting scheme) and showed use of your handheld light meter (although information on the meter was not legible).
Your images from W4A3 show a big improvement in terms of adding in the human subject, having the sun behind the subject from your W4A1; well done! In terms of composition: I would encourage you to avoid distracting elements behind your model; further details are noted in the group video critique. I've pointed out a few suggested top images within the group video critique (and re-attached contact sheet).
I would like to see you make these edits within 48 hours and re-submit as JPEG files.
RE: Provided
a 250-word production document that depicts the photographic
methodology of the shoot and a brief statement about the target genre.
Your description was well written, discusses your target market, and met the 500-word mark.
Please feel free to get in touch with me if you have any questions and/or concerns.
-Prof. F
