PH222: W5A2: Feedback
Hi Beth,
Below are the articles that I mentioned within your group video critique:
http://www.digitalcameraworld.com/2012/08/02/18-of-the-best-ever-posing-tips-for-group-photos/#null
Below is a link to teach you how to correct closed eyes within a group portrait (this was discussed in the W5A1 group video critique):
http://www.peachpit.com/articles/article.aspx?p=2216991
Information regarding your Peer Critiques and top images will be listed within the Grade book. Please feel free to get in touch with me if you have any questions and/or concerns.
-Prof. F
Below
you will find my feedback for your W5A2 for 2 out of the 3 categories
in the rubric. Feedback has been provided to you in the form of “group
video feedback & ”written feedback”.
RE:
Submitted an overall shot of the studio setup and three group portraits
using required equipment that used either a 3- or 4-light set up with a
minimum of 4 people in them that:
- Have correct exposure and demonstrate technical knowledge of camera and lighting control.
- Exhibit creativity with angles and composition (moving camera and subject frequently to explore the angles).
- Attention to line and other design elements.
- Followed instructions and requirements for assignment.
RE:
Posted a contact sheet containing a minimum of 36 photographs made
using required equipment and included a 150-word explanation about the
photographic process.
Student’s word essay met the 150-word mark that explained clearly the photographic process.
Please
note: your PDFs were not re-attached; please be sure to review the
group video critique in depth and take note of which images were
suggested as suggested as “top shots”. Your final assignment should show
a clear understanding of this feedback.
Below are the articles that I mentioned within your group video critique:
http://www.digitalcameraworld.com/2012/08/02/18-of-the-best-ever-posing-tips-for-group-photos/#null
Below is a link to teach you how to correct closed eyes within a group portrait (this was discussed in the W5A1 group video critique):
http://www.peachpit.com/articles/article.aspx?p=2216991
Information regarding your Peer Critiques and top images will be listed within the Grade book. Please feel free to get in touch with me if you have any questions and/or concerns.
-Prof. F
