PH222: W3A1 - Feedback

Hi Glen,

Thanks for submitting your assignment.  Below you will find my feedback for your W3A1 for 2 out of the 3 categories in the rubric.  Feedback has been provided to you in the form of “group video feedback”. 

RE: Posted a contact sheet containing a minimum of 36 photographs made using required equipment and included a 150-word explanation about the photographic process:

RE: Submitted a lighting setup shot and five ¾ length portraits using required equipment and a 3-light setup that explore a variety of settings from your on location shoot.
  • Have correct exposure and demonstrate technical knowledge of camera and lighting control.
  • Exhibit creativity with angles and composition (moving camera and subject frequently to explore the angles).
  • Attention to line and other design elements.
  • Followed instructions and requirements for assignment.
Student's assignment included all of the basics: 36 new images, an image of the wide-angle lighting scheme, and image of the handheld light meter in use.  However, the meter is being used to meter reflective light vs. incident light and the information on the meter is not legible in the contact sheet.  Student's essay met the 150-word mark.

Student's assignment showed a clear understanding of working "on location". Student's exposure settings and white balance were handled well.
Please note: The group video critique is posted above. Please ensure that you watch the entire length of the video to gain the most insight into this assignment.

Your contact sheet has not been re-attached to this post to ensure that you watch the entire length of the video. All students have been asked to take note of the suggested top image(s) and make the suggested edits to the(se) image(s) within 24 hours.

Information regarding your Peer Critiques and top images will be listed within the Grade book.  Please feel free to get in touch with me if you have any questions and/or concerns.
-Prof. F