PH222: W2A2 - Feedback


Hi Adrienne,
 
Thanks for re-attaching your contact sheet and making the corrections. Below you will find my feedback for your W2A2 for 1 out of the 3 categories in the rubric.  Feedback has been provided to you in the form of “group video feedback”. 

Submitted three portraits of the classic headshot using required equipment and a two-light set up that:
  • Have correct exposure and demonstrate technical knowledge of camera and lighting control.
  • Exhibit creativity with angles and composition (moving camera and subject frequently to explore the angles).
  • Attention to line and other design elements.
  • Followed instructions and requirements for assignment.
Your contact sheet has not been re-attached in this thread in order to encourage you to watch the entire length of the video;  please be sure to take note of which images I’ve pointed out as “top photos” within the video.  Please be sure to also take note of the improvements that need to be made for your future assignments:


Information regarding your Peer Critiques and top images will be listed within the Grade book.  Please feel free to get in touch with me if you have any questions and/or concerns.
-Prof. F