PH222: W2A1 - Feedback

Hi Beth,
 
Below you will find my feedback for your W2A1 for one out of the three categories in the rubric.  Feedback has been provided to you in the form of “group video feedback”.   Information regarding your Peer Critiques and top images will be listed within the Grade book. 
RE: Submitted an overall shot of the lighting setup using required equipment and two portraits in which the subject is looking at the camera and one where the subject is looking above or to the side of the camera that:
  • Have correct exposure and demonstrate technical knowledge of camera and lighting control.
  • Exhibit creativity with angles and framing (moving camera and subject frequently to explore the angles).
  • Attention to line and other compositional design elements.
  • Followed instructions and requirements for assignment.
Note: Students were asked to shoot 20 new images of a new model (above the age of 16), to shoot the first 10 images with subject looking into camera and the next 10 images of subject looking away from camera; to position subject 6 feet in front of backdrop; to supply images of handheld light meter, and wide-angle image of lighting scheme.
To watch your video, please scroll up and look just below the rubric. After you’ve viewed the video, please be sure to download your re-attached PDF for details regarding suggested top images.

Keep up the hard work & please feel free to get in touch if you have any questions or concerns!
-Prof. F